This was the Indie Book Club’s Book of the Month for August
over at Goodreads.
The story, unsurprisingly, follows a chap called Khirro.
He’s an ex-farmer who joined the army. His heart’s in the right place but his
military aptitude is, er, sub-optimal. Unfortunately, the battle he’s in goes
badly. Due to a combination of blind luck and patriotism he manages to save the
King (in a manner of speaking), but has to travel to the fearsome Necromancer
to have him fully restored.
The book, especially early on, moves at a fast pace, which I
rather like. The author’s also not afraid to kill off significant characters,
which is another aspect of the writing that appeals to me. The writing style’s
easy to read and I often ended up reading rather more than I had expected.
The characters were slightly mixed. Khirro’s convincing as a
good farmer but a poor soldier, and although he gradually becomes a little less
whiny and a bit tougher there’s no miraculous transformation into a hard as
nails hero.
There’s a nice rivalry dynamic between two of his
companions, and a cunning twist regarding the magician who travels with them. However,
Elyea did come across as a little bit flat.
I won’t spoil the ending, but the most action-packed section
of it seemed to ring a bit false. One ‘twist’ was easy to see coming (not
necessarily a bad thing) but the way the violence turned out seemed a bit off
(not excessive or explicit, just unconvincing). I can’t say more without
spoiling it, obviously.
I also think the author made a slight mistake early on. Not
sure if it’d count as a spoiler (it happens probably within the sample range)
so I won’t detail it, but he gives away a plot element I think would’ve been
better kept hidden.
The journey to the Necromancer is interesting, particularly
when they get nearer and encounter some more interesting flora and fauna. I
never felt bored with the book, and will probably buy the sequel (having
checked on Amazon, it seems the trilogy can be bought altogether in a single
e-book for less than the individual bits).
Thaddeus
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